Sunday, January 13, 2008

Communication----------Cinquain

Offense
unintended.
Feelings bent and broken.
Prognosis for recovery;

hopeful.

7 comments:

Shirley said...

Hi Dan, sounds like the real deal to me! Good job.

Jo Janoski said...

Yep! Works for me, too!

rch said...

Looks good bro, you're on a roll now ;)

paisley said...

that was definitely smooth.. i really liked the way you pulled that off......

Bubba said...

"So you're sayin' there's still a chance?"

I know not from poetry, but it sounds good to me.

Dan said...

Thanks for all of your kind words and encouragement. I'm not satisfied with it, but sometimes you have to take what you mind will allow.

hfurness said...

Isn't that what we all want, "hopeful"? Well done...